Rate my story please !?
Question: pleasee Expertise & Compliments!
I am eleven years, by the way (:
Early Light seeped through cracks in attic Marissa New York.
Answer: story very well prepared I liked the idea that you take the advice of reader and keep him for eleven who has been a story really well, as you age your vocabulary will take off and your story will be able to extend different word being employed.

For those in the inclination of stowing their money under a mattress in these troubled times comes a cautionary story from the Sag Harbor Village ...